Vacation (in 1993)
For some reason, in 4th grade I was a troublemaker. As a result of this, I had to write many 8-line rhyming poems and short essays. And I was a starting guard on what we called the 3:30 team (because we had to stay late for detention). It was a weird time. Here is one poem I wrote about vacation:
I went to the Southwest
of the U.S. of A.
I saw many sights
that filled my whole day.
I went to the Grand Canyon
and Death Valley too.
I saw the Painted Desert,
what a great view!
i like your poem. it brought me back to the summer before seventh grade when i saw the same sights. i was also brought back to seventh grade when i got detention everyday and had to take either the late bus, or the late late bus.
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